new song begining! comment wat u think

hey so this is the start of my newest song so let me know wat u think!!!!!

got me up all nite tryin not 2 cry
got me broken, wondering y
dont know how somebody could b so cold
guess 4evr dnt mean nothing anymore
said u would nevr leave, but now your gone
got me singing the same old song
 chorus:"u cnt keep ur promises
said she was just a friend
but now she got u
thought i loved u boo"
got my friends worried, not quite sure wat to do
all they know is im hurt cuz of u
thought you would save me
but you just made me worse
cant even look at you now
thats how bad it hurts